Hey Jade! I really enjoyed your story titled "Mel's Story". It is an extremely creative retelling and I love it! It is so cool how you used whales instead of demigods as the main characters. I think it was really fun how you changed the story from being forest to water based. I like water animals a lot more anyway! It really gave the story a nice twist. You had great detail and imagery throughout the entire story. Good Job! I cant wait to read more of your stories in the future.
Hi Jade! I just wanted to pop in and say a quick thank you for all the positive feedback you gave me one the semester. Confidence is a necessary ingredient of success, and you helped make sure I had it in spades.
Hey Jade! I really enjoyed your story titled "Mel's Story". It is an extremely creative retelling and I love it! It is so cool how you used whales instead of demigods as the main characters. I think it was really fun how you changed the story from being forest to water based. I like water animals a lot more anyway! It really gave the story a nice twist. You had great detail and imagery throughout the entire story. Good Job! I cant wait to read more of your stories in the future.
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